My tutor’s comments on my subject choice were
positive and showed an appreciation of the fact that I had aimed to show
balance in terms of the physical, mental and aesthetic. She felt that my images
were well balanced in composition and colour, however the last image was
brought into question.
My tutor felt that this image itself appeared
unbalanced and also threw the set off as it brought up more of a narrative
context. I had not considered this while putting the images together; it just
felt like a good final image. The other images however do not create a
narrative so I feel that it would benefit my set to omit this image. It has
also been pointed out that three of the images have a very similar composition;
I will consider which two would be best to keep in the set.
Although my images are focussed more successfully
than in my last assignment, my tutor has pointed out some images in which the
focusing could have been used differently. I aim to work towards taking more
time to think about where I would like the image to be in future images. More
successful images with regards to focus were close up shots of hands.
Although I did not include contact sheets for this
assignment, I intend to revisit my selection to get together a more cohesive
set.
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